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Sick LoveEndure me, lure me
Deceive me
Tel me the tale
Of good and evil
But lie the ending
Lie to me

take wings over the sea
And remember
Leave me waiting
On this lonely shore
'Till my dull smile
Turns to tears

I am the snake of the charmer
Who only dances with me
The bird in the colden cage
yet I sing, oh I sing
I'm the jewel in my love's crown
Crown sported with grin

I'm your loyal pet
Tell me: stay!
Leave me again
Alone in this house
I'll chase my tail
Forget me

Betray me, ignore me
And yet again
I will still listen
You telling fairytales
Oh how I need it:
Deception

I am the snake of the charmer
Who only dances with m
Bring it on!You can make me bleed
You can make me cry
You can torture me
Even take my life
But my heart, my soul, you will never have

If you listen carefully enough, you may hear the last echoes of my nevermore beating heart

You can bind my hands
You can blind my eyes
You can cut of my wings
Try to poses my mind
But my freedom, my will, cannot be broght down

If you look closely enough, you can see my fragile light slowly fading out

You can shut my mouth
You can make me crawl
You can hit me
Cause me to fall
But my determination, my mind, shall only grow stronger

If you lean near enough, you might feel the warmth of my last tender breath

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~0-Dolunay-0 Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Constructive Critique

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None found :D

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More details! :la:

Anatomy Excellent
Colouring/Painting A nice style
Detailing Very good, but maybe I should add more fur to the horse
Background and effects Not very completed, but it's a very eye-catching style
Rate 4,2/5 :star:

Hopefully I helped you! :heart:

Cheers :la:
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~silverybeast Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the critique! :)
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~0-Dolunay-0 Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Np ^^
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Mood: Love =TheGalleryOfEve Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love it! :iconflyingheartsplz::aww::iconflyingheartsplz:
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~silverybeast Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you like :)
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=TheGalleryOfEve Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:tighthug:
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