Sick LoveEndure me, lure meDeceive meTel me the taleOf good and evilBut lie the endingLie to metake wings over the seaAnd rememberLeave me waitingOn this lonely shore'Till my dull smileTurns to tearsI am the snake of the charmerWho only dances with meThe bird in the colden cageyet I sing, oh I singI'm the jewel in my love's crownCrown sported with grinI'm your loyal petTell me: stay!Leave me againAlone in this houseI'll chase my tailForget meBetray me, ignore meAnd yet againI will still listenYou telling fairytalesOh how I need it:DeceptionI am the snake of the charmerWho only dances with m
Bring it on!You can make me bleedYou can make me cryYou can torture meEven take my lifeBut my heart, my soul, you will never haveIf you listen carefully enough, you may hear the last echoes of my nevermore beating heartYou can bind my handsYou can blind my eyesYou can cut of my wingsTry to poses my mindBut my freedom, my will, cannot be broght downIf you look closely enough, you can see my fragile light slowly fading outYou can shut my mouthYou can make me crawlYou can hit meCause me to fallBut my determination, my mind, shall only grow strongerIf you lean near enough, you might feel the warmth of my last tender breath
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Colouring/Painting A nice style
Detailing Very good, but maybe I should add more fur to the horse
Background and effects Not very completed, but it's a very eye-catching style
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